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- I gotta admit one thing that you look more beautiful in photos than in the real life.
- I gotta admit one thing that you look more gorgeous in pictures than in the real life.

- Are these natural enough?

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Well, of course! The pictures were Photoshopped! (altered with Photoshop software.)

Take out the before real life. And some punctuation after one thing would help, either a comma or an em-dash or colon (a bit formal, though). You could also delete that:

I gotta admit one thing -- you look more beautiful/gorgeous in photos/pictures than in real life.



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