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Can I say,
He enjoyed the process during the period of planting the plant.
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planting the plant is repetitious
and
enjoyed the process is a bit pretentious
but otherwise OK.
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So, how do I correct it?
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quote: He enjoyed the process during the period of planting the plant.
He enjoyed the process of planting.
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