Gustavo, Contributor posted:
(6) is, by far, the worst of all, because both participial clauses ("my fingers aching" an absolute one) are adjacent to each other. Such juxtaposition is not allowed.
- Although my fingers hurt, I kept on writing the draft because I had little time left for submitting/to submit it. (much better than "for its submission")
Thanks a lot for the reply. However, I need a little more on 'such juxtaposition is not allowed', besides needing help to understand why '"for its submission"' is a less preferable option. Would you kindly help me?
PS: My Bearing/Bore post may also need some kind attention.