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"According to the survey, respondents have a clear idea of gender stereotypes in society and also identified areas where women are under-employed."

Is the sentence correct or it needs the subject pronoun "they" after "and" in the second clause?

and another question:

"Also, 43.8% of the respondents think that the local population, especially women, are not involved in discussing gender issues and drafting a policy document, which is a problem for a significant part of the respondents (80%)."

'are not involved in discussing gender issues and drafting a policy document'

can this predicate be replaced by "are not involved in the discussion of gender issues and the drafting of a policy document"? Which is more proper?

Thanks for help.

Last edited by David Toklikishvili
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