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Reply to "Is the bold grammatical?"

Andrew, I have read the article and now that I've reread the sentence in question, what I find really awkward is the use of "doing." I think you should rewrite the subject, that is, whatever comes before "adds":

[...] activity related to what securities prices are doing “within a nanosecond time frame” adds “little to the financial system’s ability to perform any of its economic functions”.

What do you mean by "activity related to what securities prices are doing "within a nanosecond time frame"?

Last edited by Gustavo, Co-Moderator
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