Hi. Thanks for the replies, much appreciated.
One last thing, what do you think of parallel sentence structure. Is this a must, or a just a style of writing.
I wrote about a man entranced by a pile of diamonds:
"Dazzling, hypnotic, as the multicoloured waterfall caught the lights."
But i was told off, stating that it should be dazzling, hypnotising,
What do you think? Is it a rule to be strictly obeyed, sometimes obeyed, or is it just an optional writing style?
Many thanks. John.