Hello all,

I was writing to a travel agency regarding my previous booking this morning, and I wrote this in the beginning of my email:

"My name is Alex Wang, my email address is alexw517@yahoo.com, and my booking reference is YIKDY4."

Did I use the commas correctly? I wonder if there is a simpler and better way to write it.
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The punctuation in that sentence looks perfect to me, Alex. And I think it's simple. Why do you think it needs to be simplified?

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