IS there considered correct? 

1 Susan helped the elderly woman which was not for her money.

2 The laptop has a powerful processor that is energy saving.

 

Thanks 

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bear_bear posted:

IS there considered correct? 

1 Susan helped the elderly woman which was not for her money.

2 The laptop has a powerful processor that is energy saving.

Hi, bear_bear,

Sentence (1) is incorrect. What are you trying to say? Are you trying to say this?

(1a) Susan helped the elderly woman, but not because she wanted her money.

In (2), you need a hyphen between "energy" and "saving." I recommend:

(2a) The laptop has a powerful, energy-saving processor.

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