Hi, Navi,

I find the sentence perfect as is. Adverbs of manner are usually used without commas between verbs like rise, increase, grow, fall, decline, etc. and the number that follows:

- rise slightly to xxx
- increase sharply to xxx
- grow moderately to xxx
- fall gradually to xxx
- decline abruptly to xxx

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