I am working on ps right now, and i have a problem, in which i do not the right way to punctuate sounds in my essay; for example:
the coming sentence is in my essay:
“Inhale!” my chest gets higher.
“Exhale!” my chest gets back.
i want to give the sound of inhaling or exhaling and then describe what will happen next, which is the move of my chest.
is this the right way or not? if not what is the right one so?