Yama posted:
Reading is a hobby that helps it's owner.

Is it acceptable to use the word "owner"?

Hello, Yama,

No, that is not an acceptable use of the word "owner." One can be an owner of a hobby store (i.e., an owner of a store that specializes in typical hobby-related items) but not an owner of a hobby. You could say:

(1) Reading is a hobby that helps the one who has it.
(2) Reading is a beneficial hobby.

Sentence (2) is much clearer and more succinct than (1). I'd like to direct your attention to a punctuation error in your example sentence. It's should be its, without an apostrophe. Its is a possessive pronoun. It's is short for it is.

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