Does the below paragraph make sense or is it clear enough to understand ?

 

Imagine if life was smart enough to know the ongoing onion market price and generously threw us some onion over lemons to make millions out of onion trade,surely that whole onion trade would have changed the old well known saying to "When life gives onion we should start our onion trade"

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Subie posted:

Does the below paragraph make sense or is it clear enough to understand ?

Hello, Subie and welcome to the Grammar Exchange.

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