Hi,
It would be greatly appreciated if you could assist with my questions in bold below.
Example:
In support of your contention that you acquired the units in the ABC unit trust, you provided the following documents:
- a) a XYZ bank history report which shows that, on 1 January 2000, you withdrew $100K to acquire the units in the said trust. You need to use “that” as it follows by a date. [Can I remove the relative clause “which”?]
- b) a XYZ bank history report which shows you withdrew $100K on 1 January 2020 to acquire the units in the said trust [can remove which, another [Can I remove the relative clause “which”?)
- c) a XYZ bank history report showing you withdrew $100Kon 1 January 2020 to acquire the units in the said trust. [Can I use "shows/showed" instead of showing?]