Hello, I’m severely dyslexic, in the 60’s it was missed in school.
My son a while back asked me to put down on paper some of the things we did and saw in the late 70’s, while I was in the 82nd.
Now that technology has essentially done away with dyslexia, I wanted to try my hand at writing some of these stories. Which I did, and they are a complete mess. So now I have to go back and learn how to form a correct sentence, any help with that would be appreciated.
Before searching out live help, I spent some time on YouTube, so I know enough just to be dangerous.
What’s wrong with this sentence:
These weren’t the usual train blasts he heard at this intersection, this was rapid blasts alerting people to danger.