I've been asked to proof-read some wording for a website and public documents and something about the wording isn't sitting right with me. I could be wrong, but it reads funny starting with "an evidence-based..." I'd like to be able to support my commentary, but I don't know for sure what, if anything, is wrong grammatically. Any guidance would be greatly appreciated!
An evidence-based program that has been adopted by over 20 countries, Mental Health First Aid teaches adults how to identify, understand and respond to signs of mental illnesses and substance use disorders.
An evidence-based program, adopted in over 20 countries, Mental Health First Aid teaches the five-step ALGEE action plan: <it then lists the plan>