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Can I say,

(1) They laughed at the monkey because the ball was taken by it. After a few minutes, the monkey had joined the game.

(2) Its action was funny. They laughed at the monkey. Later, it took the football and gave it to Peter. it joined them to play the football game. It was an unforgettable day.

(3) They laughed the monkey after it took / had taken the ball. After that, it joined / joined in (the) football game with them. Then, they continued playing happily.

(4) They laughed at the monkey. It did many funny action to them. They wanted to take the ball (back), but it did not give them. So they let it to join their (football) game.

(5) They laughed at the monkey. It had taken away their (foot)ball. They felt sad because they could not continue the game.
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(1) They laughed at the monkey because it had taken their ball. After a few minutes, the monkey joined (in) the game.

(2) Its action was funny. They laughed at the monkey. Then it took the football and gave it to Peter. It joined them in the football game. It was an unforgettable day.

(3) They laughed at the monkey after it took / had taken the ball. Then it joined them in the football game. After that they continued playing happily.

(4) They laughed at the monkey. It did many funny things to them. They wanted to take the ball (back), but it did not give it to them. So they let it join (in) their game.

(5) They laughed at the monkey. It had taken away their (foot)ball. They got upset because they could not continue the game.
I'm sorry to say this, Vincent, but I think you're starting to abuse this site. We're not here to edit members' writings, especially incredibly long postings like this and one other you've recently put up.

I did edit two other postings for you similar to the one above, but this is going a bit too far. If you have a specific grammar question or a point of grammar you'd like all of us to discuss, please post it. But please stop posting editing jobs.

Thank you.

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