I have written a script and I am having a last minute crisis whether the following line is grammatically correct. The context is a prayer scene, and I am stuck whether it should be 'Thou' or 'Thee'.
This is how I have written it:
May Thou hold my heart in Thy hands
Which I thought was correct. As God, the 'Thou' is the subject doing something to the speaker 'my'.
Can anyone validate this? I would be most grateful!