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@Tony C posted:

Thanks David, should I reword to: The term deposit repayment advice of LA Bank, sounds better?

There are a number of possibilities, including the six-word sandwich you began with. Without compound nouns, perhaps "LA bank term deposit repayment advice" means "LA Bank's advice on how to repay the deposit for the term." But feel free to use whatever business jargon your company likes to use.

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