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July 2022

object pronouns

Hello. Hope all is well with everyone. The little I know about object pronouns is being challenged by this sentence: Mrs Smith caught the boy who was trying to steal her apples. OK, if Mrs Smith is the subject of the sentence and caught is the main verb, then shouldn't the noun, the boy , be the object of the sentence? If the boy is the object, can you kindly tell me why I am unable to replace it with the object pronoun ' him '? To make it clearer: I can very easily replace the girl in the...Read More...
Hi, Gustavo and David. As always, thank you so much for the excellent answers! I totally understand your explanations. Sorry that I took forever to reply. Have been a little under the weather. Thanks again.Read More...
Last Reply By gilbert · First Unread Post

How does one stylize this controversy regarding "the Iran-Contra affair"?

The Wikipedia article goes with an en-dash and lowercase "a" on "affair", whereas the NYT is all over the place: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Iran%E2%80%93Contra_affair Iran–Contra affair [en-dash and lowercase] https://www.nytimes.com/2022/06/08/opinion/january-6-hearings.html Iran-Contra Affair [hyphen and uppercase] https://www.nytimes.com/2022/01/31/us/john-k-singlaub-dead.html Iran-contra affair [hyphen and lowercase on BOTH "contra" AND "affair"...Read More...
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Last Reply By Andrew Van Wagner · First Unread Post

sleepy

Hi, What's the difference in usage and meaning between sleepy and drowsy? Thank you very much.Read More...
Hi ahmed_btm, I mean both I was tired because I stayed up to watch a film and 'I was sleepy/drowsy while watching the film. Thank you very much for your help.Read More...
Last Reply By kuen · First Unread Post

absolute clause in the wrong place?

The article concludes that much of the explosion in corporate profits is made possible by market consolidation: giant companies no longer subject to the pressures of inflation. Is the above sentence grammatical? I think it should be: "... giant companies no longer being subject to the pressures of inflation." Source: https://www.rawstory.com/big-business-democrats/ Interesting article, by the way. Gratefully, NaviRead More...
Hi, Navi, The article concludes that much of the explosion in corporate profits is made possible by market consolidation: giant companies no longer subject to the pressures of inflation. I agree with Gustavo that it's not an absolute construction. Absolutes consist of non-finite clauses, but giant companies no longer subject to the pressures of inflation is a noun phrase, not a clause. It may be possible, though, to make a case for it being a supplementary (non-defining) appositive noun...Read More...
Last Reply By billj · First Unread Post

be accustomed to

This is the sentence I just made up. I think ' avoiding' is correct, but I wonder if I can use 'avoid,' too in the blank. Thank you for your time and help in advance. If you do what I say, you will get accustomed to ( ) unnecessary expenses.Read More...
What a delightful coincidence, Gustavo—thanks so much for sharing!Read More...
Last Reply By David, Moderator · First Unread Post

some or all

a. When you gave the disk to John at the party, guests noticed it. b. When you gave the disk to John at the party, the guests noticed it. I think in (a) it might have been all of the guests or only some of them who noticed it (most likely some). In (b) they all noticed it. c. When we published that article, readers thought our magazine had changed its policy. d. When we published that article, the readers thought our magazine had changed its policy. I think (c) and (d) practically mean the...Read More...

Is there ambiguity in this?

See here (it might be ambiguous what the part in bold modifies): a better way to deal with high gas prices in the US would be “a windfall tax on the fossil fuel industries that are drowning in profits” with “the revenues distributed to those who have been gouged by the neoliberal class war of the past 40 years”Read More...
A comma is always required to precede an absolute construction. It is necessary not to eliminate ambiguity (which I find to be nonexistent considering that "revenues" needs to be understood as "tax revenues") but to render the sentence correct. Without the quotes, we could even add "being" for the sake of clarity: - [...] a better way to deal with high gas prices in the US would be “a windfall tax on the fossil fuel industries that are drowning in profits,” with the revenues being...Read More...
Last Reply By Gustavo, Co-Moderator · First Unread Post

It's OK to relax about ambiguity, right?

Consider this it is surely a mistake to carry out a sadistic assassination of a journalist for the Washington Post I'm so OCD that I would worry about the ambiguity; you could interpret this sentence as meaning that someone assassinated the journalist on the behalf of a newspaper. But people are generally very relaxed about such ambiguities, right?Read More...
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Last Reply By Andrew Van Wagner · First Unread Post

What's up with bloated hyperlinks?

Not specifically a grammar thing, but you guys probably know about this. The New Yorker is a major publication, but look at the hyperlink for the bold: https://www.newyorker.com/maga...g-the-british-empire In one colony after another, as the former Guardian journalist Ian Cobain details in his 2016 book, ‘ The History Thieves ,’ the British went down in a blaze of documents. This is the hyperlink in the article: https://www.amazon.com/History...-20&linkCode=w50 But it should be this...Read More...
Thanks! Sorry to bother you guys about that; was just curious and thought someone on here might know all about this.Read More...
Last Reply By Andrew Van Wagner · First Unread Post

to be + of + adj + noun

Hello I have a question. what's the difference between these two sentences? 1. The defendant is of no fixed abode. 2. The defendant has no fixed abode.Read More...
Yes, there are idiomatic phrases like "be of assistance," "be of importance," "be of help," "be of use, "be of age," "be of service," "be of the opinion," "be of interest," "be of value." However, in the examples I provided above, the adjective will tend to be more usual with "be." If a noun is used, "have" will sound more natural: - be highly experienced / have vast experience (rather than "be of vast experience") - be wealthy / have great wealth (rather than "be of great wealth") - be...Read More...
Last Reply By Gustavo, Co-Moderator · First Unread Post

Do I need to hyphenate this?

"Middle East NWFZ" It refers to a “Nuclear-Weapons-Free Zone (NWFZ) in the Middle East”. The words "Middle East" could be joined with a hyphen.Read More...
"Middle East" being a proper name that refers to a region of the world, it would be incorrect, as well as very unnecessary, to hyphenate it in such a phrase.Read More...
Last Reply By David, Moderator · First Unread Post

Is this a bad sentence?

See here and note that "shatter and disturb" might be interpreted as verbs that attach to the noun that precedes "shatter": https://join.substack.com/p/fantasy And Chang argues in the book that the evidence “will undoubtedly disturb many people”—disturb people intellectually when “historical myths and overly abstract theories” shatter and disturb people morally when it comes time to consider the human toll of harming poor economies.Read More...
I find your repetition of "Chang says . . . Chang says" awkward, as well as your habitual usage of an em dash to connect independent clauses. Consider this alternative. Note that I have edited out "also," which is needlessly redundant. Chang says that "many people" will find the book disturbing, pointing out that the book challenges "historical myths and overly abstract theories" and makes you consider the morality of harming poor economies.Read More...
Last Reply By David, Moderator · First Unread Post

Should I adjust this sentence?

See here: https://join.substack.com/p/should-2a-exist So there’s no reason for 2A to exist if we pay attention to “history and tradition”—that’s the deeper point that people should spotlight and the fights over interpretation are secondary. You can see that "spotlight and" might seem like it's leading into another verb; for example, you might expect it to say "spotlight and emphasize" or something like that. So I might adjust it to say "spotlight, whereas the fights..." instead. This is a...Read More...
The part of the sentence following the verb "spotlight" is a second independent clause introduced by the conjunction "and." It can be written as a separate sentence. Your sentence would naturally be written as three sentences: So there's no reason for 2A to exist if we pay attention to "history and tradition." That's the deeper point that people should spotlight. The fights over interpretation are secondary.Read More...
Last Reply By David, Moderator · First Unread Post

Should I adjust this or is this OK?

https://join.substack.com/p/high-stakes he “has no illusions about the nature and roots of the war” and sees it as a proxy war in which Ukraine is collateral damage For example, you might add a comma before "and sees". And there are other possible adjustments, I guess. The issue is the conjunction "and"; that's the point where I might have glued the sentence together in an awkward way, but I'm not sure if there's any issue.Read More...
I agree with Gustavo that a comma is desirable in the places highlighted above in the second and third sentences. Normally, except when the independent clauses are very short, a comma should separate two independent clauses. In each of those two sentences, what follows Gustavo's highlighted comma is the conjunction "and" followed by the second independent of the sentence. I agree with Gustavo that a comma before "and sees" (the beginning of the second predicate of the independent clause) is...Read More...
Last Reply By David, Moderator · First Unread Post

Why isn't "corporate tax code" hyphenated?

You see a lot of three-word (or even four-word?) constructions like this (I think) where the NYT doesn't hyphenate it.Read More...
Like most magazines and newspapers in the United States, the NYT follows the hyphenation convention that "well known" should be hyphenated in attributive position (e.g., " It's a very well-known phrase . . . . " [ article ]) but not in predicative position (" The phrase is very well known ").Read More...
Last Reply By David, Moderator · First Unread Post

Is this construction OK?

See here: https://join.substack.com/p/empire these payouts “seeded fortunes” that “generations of prominent bankers, writers, engineers, and politicians” then inherited The issue is what "then inherited" modifies. Consider this: "The man, woman, and child then ate." What does "then ate" modify?Read More...
Just to add to Gustavo's explanation, I think that you may not be perceiving the relative clause in your example, Andrew. Let's use pronoun substitution to help you see the structure of the noun phrase. We can substitute "they" for "generations of prominent bankers, writers, engineers, and politicians." We can also substitute "which" for "that": fortunes which they then inherited The relative clause ("which they then inherited") is an adjunct, or modifier, within the overall noun phrase...Read More...
Last Reply By David, Moderator · First Unread Post

WOULD

"The next five overs, from the 30th to 34th, produced just 13 runs and also featured Praisdh Krishna dropping Willey off Hardik. Willey was on 1 at that point and would go on to score 41." Dear Sir What is the meaning of " would " here? Why was " would " used in the above sentence? Source : https://www.espncricinfo.com/series/india-in-england-2022-1276893/england-vs-india-2nd-odi-1276908/match-reportRead More...
Gustavo, Would you mind writing a couple of sentences as such with WOULD to have a better understanding for me?Read More...
Last Reply By Former Member · First Unread Post

<which/where> I graduated from

Hello, everyone, 1) This is the school which I graduated from. 2) This is the school where I graduated from. I think ‘graduate from’ is not an action verb with ‘where’, nor is it a phrasal verb such as ‘come from’ in the <USAGE NOTE> below but a prepositional verb. Thus, I feel 1) above is correct. However, is 2) completely unacceptable at all? Your opinions would be much appreciated. <USAGE NOTE> When 'where' is used to refer to a point of origin, the preposition 'from' is...Read More...
Hello, Ahmed btm, thanks for your reply. 1. In ' This is the school where I graduated .' I think this could be divided into; 1) This is the school. + 2) From which I graduated. = Where ( There) I graduated. I wonder if from where above could be changed into where , since I feel 2) " There I graduated." wouldn't be natural. I feel " There I graduated." might mean "I graduated at the school ." For this matter I agree with you.Read More...
Last Reply By deepcosmos · First Unread Post

"they" being used to avoid using "he or she"

Hello everybody, I'd like to know if "they" is correctly used in the following sentence: No matter how mature a teenager is, if they are constantly exposed to violence, they will end up being damaged by the games. In the old days, probably, "he" or "he or she" should be used in places where "they" is used in the above sentence. What about now? Thanks in advance for your help.Read More...
Hi, Taiman, The outdate way is to use 'his' as a gender-neutral pronoun. 'He/She' is not a good option here. It is a good option only when it is used once. However, if it is repeated, the sentence looks clumsy. You can use 'they' as you did or simply change 'a teenager is' to 'teenagers are'.Read More...
Last Reply By ahmed_btm · First Unread Post

his guests

a. Jeff's friends went to Sally's place and talked to her father. Does that necessarily mean all of Jeff's friends went to Sally's place and talked to her father? b. I knew that if I gave the flash drive to John at the party, his guests would notice it. Does that necessarily mean all of his guests would notice it? c. I knew that if I gave the flash drive to John at the party, the guests would notice it. Does that necessarily mean all of the guests would notice it? Many thanks.Read More...
Hi, Azz, No, it doesn't. Mostly, it means some of his dearest friends were the ones who went to talk to Sally's father. I think it depends on what kind of guests John had at his party. Are they good observers or do they belong to those people who live in their bubbles and care about nothing? What if one or two of his guests were blind? I think if you want to indicate to the hearer the idea that all of his guests would notice it, it is better to insert 'all' and focus on it while speaking.Read More...
Last Reply By ahmed_btm · First Unread Post

People are very relaxed about punctuation and things, correct?

I recently looked at a high-stakes US policy document that may have precipitated the war in Ukraine; there were hilarious and ridiculous typos in it and sloppy punctuation. I recently looked at a "formal statement to the court" from Noam Chomsky; the statement was used in Julian Assange's extradition trial. There were hilarious and ridiculous typos in it and sloppy punctuation. The point is that not everyone is OCD about punctuation and things, correct? Also, take a look at the title of this...Read More...
Yes, the treaty is about anti-ballistic missiles; however, you are right that "anti-ballistic missile treaty" can still refer to a missile treaty that is anti-ballistic. For the reference to be unambiguously to a treaty about anti-ballistic missiles, a second hyphen is needed: "anti-ballistic-missile treaty." You can see here that the second hyphen is used in "anti-ballistic-missile proposal." As to why the second hyphen is not used in the example you found, it could be ignorance or...Read More...
Last Reply By David, Moderator · First Unread Post

“do accounting” and “do the accounting”

What would be the difference between “do accounting” and “do the accounting” ? Am I right if I assume the former means the activity of accounting in general and in abstract way, whereas the latter keeping the image of a particular accounting task in mind?Read More...
Thank you very much for your detailed explanation, Gustavo, A lot of examples of expressions without "the" were hit in Google search. However, after I read your reply, I checked them again and found most of them were in the title lines!Read More...
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